22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

I have receive not feedback from my previous elevator pitch  post in this blog.I have seen other people pitch that help give me idea on how to improve my pitch, along with inspiration from other assignment I have done for this class. This improvement include setting my camera down and instead doing a standing pitch instead of walking in a circle with camera focus on the upper half of my body. I felt this gave it more professional feeling to it, while maintaining motion required for this pitch. By not doing it siting down . I also include more detail on my customer base, how I know my app will be able to function and possible pricing model. Which were thing lacking from my first pitch. Overall I feel like this pitch improve a lot. I think that I were to do a future pitch I will focus on improving image quality along with fully memorizing my speech in order to do in one go with not pauses. 

Link: https://youtu.be/TUIhh5yaCjg